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data/en/employment.yml

@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ source:
       Part of the core IT team managing the local network with 500
       users. Administration of on-premises web services for the whole
       university campus serving 20k students, staff, and the general
-      public.  Set up many network services from LDAP directory, mail
-      server to the web frontends.  Lead the transition to writing
+      public. Set up many network services from LDAP directory, mail
+      server to the web frontends. I lead the transition to writing
       configuration as code. Currently implementing delivery pipelines
       working hand in hand with dev teams.
 
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ source:
     time: 2019-2020
     description:
       My goal was designing and implementing a reliable delivery
-      process.  The solution included containerization of software to
-      achieve uniformity between environments.  Also did training of
-      the dev teams with the aim of generating a common git culture
+      process. The solution included the containerization of software
+      to achieve uniformity between environments. I also did training
+      of the dev teams with the aim of generating a common git culture
       and an ability to implement new pipelines and tweak existing
       ones.
 
@@ -40,5 +40,5 @@ source:
     description:
       Here's where it all started! My work was dealing with end-user
       problems in GNU/Linux and Windows workstations. Our biggest
-      challenge was migration of the whole bunch of Windows users to
-      GNU/Linux.
+      challenge was the migration of the whole bunch of Windows users
+      to GNU/Linux.